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Postby DinghyDog » Wed Jun 20, 2012 5:42 pm

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Re: Instant thoughts. (add yours two if you like)

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Re: Instant thoughts. (add yours two if you like)

Postby rollings » Wed Jun 20, 2012 5:50 pm

DinghyDog wrote:yours two


thank you
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Re: Instant thoughts. (add yours two if you like)

Postby justam » Wed Jun 20, 2012 5:58 pm

DinghyDog wrote:
Sounds like it would please a woman too.


This is an excellent observation! :D
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Re: Instant Messages

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Re: Instant thoughts. (add yours two if you like)

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Re: Instant thoughts. (add yours two if you like)

Postby hedonist » Wed Jun 20, 2012 8:44 pm

DinghyDog wrote:There are words stuck in my head
Not swirling
No eddy of words refusing to let me think of anything else
But words refusing to let me think of them
There are words stuck in my head
Not mine
Maybe that's why they refuse to come to me
I try coax them
I call to them like I would to a cat
A chicken
A cow
Still, they don't come
How do you call to a word?

I'm not sure you can...coax, call.

Turn off your mind, relax and float downstream...?

(that was beautiful, by the way)
For every mistake, we must surely be learning.
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Re: Instant thoughts. (add yours two if you like)

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Re: Instant thoughts. (add yours two if you like)

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Re: Instant thoughts. (add yours two if you like)

Postby rollings » Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:55 pm

into nothing I stare

as if doing that would take me there
the place where I used to go
that staring once did so accomplish...

this place--
the walls were so smooth and golden
as what is gold is gold
the vault was unlocked and I came and went right through
anytime

I was done talking to you

but now
what once was that space has returned
to being

just that space

and nothing is there

it really is not there

there was a time that I thought I was just lost
but now I think

that it really might be gone

I do pray for its safe return
but for now

like a knife through the air

I can't believe

there's nothing there
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Re: Instant thoughts. (add yours two if you like)

Postby DinghyDog » Thu Jun 21, 2012 3:32 am

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Re: Instant thoughts. (add yours two if you like)

Postby Godfather. » Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:25 am

The Seeker.

Godfather.
it dosen't matter to me what a man dose for a living you understand..
as long as his interest's don't conflict with mine.
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Re: Instant thoughts. (add yours two if you like)

Postby justam » Thu Jun 21, 2012 9:39 am

I've discovered that it's entirely possible to make lunch out of chicken broth and whatever else I feel like adding. :? :P
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Re: Instant thoughts. (add yours two if you like)

Postby rollings » Thu Jun 21, 2012 1:18 pm

justam wrote:I've discovered that it's entirely possible to make lunch out of chicken broth and whatever else I feel like adding. :? :P


yes, Justam, that's called "soup"

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Re: Instant thoughts. (add yours two if you like)

Postby justam » Thu Jun 21, 2012 1:20 pm

rollings wrote:
justam wrote:I've discovered that it's entirely possible to make lunch out of chicken broth and whatever else I feel like adding. :? :P


yes, Justam, that's called "soup"



;)


I know! I just didn't realize how easy it was to invent new kinds each day. :lol:
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