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Your Majesty Squared

Postby rollings » Thu Apr 26, 2012 7:08 am

While I'm looking I can see your weeping willow is hidden
not just transparent from my view

The tapestry of the landscape of the canvas of the majesty of dusk
and you painted shadows (and who's shadows painted you)

At dusk you are seen being the walking shadow that you are
It's alright
night will return you to being invisible
flying down while you dream you are sleeping
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Re: Your Majesty Squared

Postby skyeriverwinter » Thu Apr 26, 2012 7:09 am

wonderful
...if i don't fall apart...
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Re: Your Majesty Squared

Postby rollings » Thu Apr 26, 2012 7:13 am

skyeriverwinter wrote:wonderful


thank you!



(why did you "pull" your poem "blah blah"?, I commented on it but in that one minute it was gone!)
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Re: Your Majesty Squared

Postby skyeriverwinter » Thu Apr 26, 2012 7:20 am

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Re: Your Majesty Squared

Postby rollings » Thu Apr 26, 2012 7:27 am

skyeriverwinter wrote:
rollings wrote:
skyeriverwinter wrote:wonderful


thank you!



(why did you "pull" your poem "blah blah"?, I commented on it but in that one minute it was gone!)

:fp: because it was crap.... :lol:


my comment on it didn't go like that.... 8-)
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