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Orange peelings

Postby chadwick » Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:07 pm

Orange peelings (part I)

He sat me down
silk and satin pillows ran the span of everywhere
“just pull up a cloud of your own
or share a bed” he said

You have your recording instruments, yes?
referring to my notebook and pen
He asked me if I were ready?
“Are you open?” he asked, looking into my face from across length

“Yes I am prepared“
is what I verbalized
he then took my hand and opened it
he placed on my palm a crystal

Crystal northwest moon
I ran my fingers all over it’s ages
while holding all of its time
nothing could distract or distant
this beginning

I opened the door

The next day was that fast
fire glowed so quick it was all a blink
then a black switch
no stars
“but soon they will fly” he said

Again the cushions surrounded all the grass
all the wheat fields golden and windy
all the silk worms
farming against sunflowers and silver lakebeds
where shacks fill pleasurable desires
all sheltered by rusty tin roofs

The end table next to me
home of caged rabbit
eye level with me bird

I felt sorry for them
bird and rabbit

The lady on the floor
just loaded a dreamy needle
a strange shadow soon
when the rabbit gets jumpy

Every time

Tonight he said
“the drugs are growing for the future… each narcotic”

I was amazed by the rabbit's math skills
as his furry paw ran this calculator
adding and subtracting opium exchanges

Then the global toad
a striking figure
I was so lost … orange peelings
the smell of oranges

Writing the madness
I surrounded

he asked me
the colors
the sounds
and the silences

This is when I asked
for ink and said
“the glass bowl looks fun”

Five silk worms came through the door on pillows carried by diamonds
I was handed a root writing tool
rain for ink
he said “do not ever not have a pen, do you hear me?
And that is a warning.

to be continued...
for poetry through the ceiling.
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Re: Orange peelings

Postby mysticweed » Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:09 pm

whoa
cw
good shit
eat - play - love - and fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

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Re: Orange peelings

Postby chadwick » Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:10 pm

more of a instant thought
kinda
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Re: Orange peelings

Postby justam » Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:15 pm

The advice about the writing utensil was good. :geek:

Damn it, don't EVER show up without a pencil (or in your case, a pen) !! ;)
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Re: Orange peelings

Postby mysticweed » Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:16 pm

chadwick wrote:more of a instant thought
kinda


well if this is how you write on the fly
good shit, man
eat - play - love - and fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

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Re: Orange peelings

Postby prism » Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:22 pm

peelings from a blood orange?
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Re: Orange peelings

Postby chadwick » Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:22 pm

lettinggo wrote:
chadwick wrote:more of a instant thought
kinda


well if this is how you write on the fly
good shit, man

no plans
a tiny spark
a vision

go.................
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ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

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Re: Orange peelings

Postby Godfather. » Sat Nov 20, 2010 8:20 am

wish I had your visions for writing,that is incredible,your work just keeps getting better and better it's a constant amazement to me.

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Re: Orange peelings

Postby acrossssSsssshittt » Sat Nov 20, 2010 7:02 pm

this is fucking cool
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Re: Orange peelings

Postby rollings » Sat Nov 20, 2010 8:26 pm

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Re: Orange peelings

Postby chadwick » Mon Nov 22, 2010 6:14 pm

chadwick wrote:Orange peelings (part I)

He sat me down
silk and satin pillows ran the span of everywhere
“just pull up a cloud of your own
or share a bed” he said

You have your recording instruments, yes?
referring to my notebook and pen
He asked me if I were ready?
“Are you open?” he asked, looking into my face from across length

“Yes I am prepared“
is what I verbalized
he then took my hand and opened it
he placed on my palm a crystal

Crystal northwest moon
I ran my fingers all over it’s ages
while holding all of its time
nothing could distract or distant
this beginning

I opened the door

The next day was that fast
fire glowed so quick it was all a blink
then a black switch
no stars
“but soon they will fly” he said

Again the cushions surrounded all the grass
all the wheat fields golden and windy
all the silk worms
farming against sunflowers and silver lakebeds
where shacks fill pleasurable desires
all sheltered by rusty tin roofs

The end table next to me
home of caged rabbit
eye level with me bird

I felt sorry for them
bird and rabbit

The lady on the floor
just loaded a dreamy needle
a strange shadow soon
when the rabbit gets jumpy

Every time

Tonight he said
“the drugs are growing for the future… each narcotic”

I was amazed by the rabbit's math skills
as his furry paw ran this calculator
adding and subtracting opium exchanges

Then the global toad
a striking figure
I was so lost … orange peelings
the smell of oranges

Writing the madness
I surrounded

he asked me
the colors
the sounds
and the silences

This is when I asked
for ink and said
“the glass bowl looks fun”

Five silk worms came through the door on pillows carried by diamonds
I was handed a root writing tool
rain for ink
he said “do not ever not have a pen, do you hear me?
And that is a warning.

to be continued...


Shocked
I could only listen
new writing
new words
looking at the worms
somehow the room stood still
I couldn’t hear
yet I was listening full
I was growing
I was getting up without

Writing was told to me

Letters from time to time
did just that
more like star to experience
moon to pond expanding
or marble to rolling
it was all lubricated chaos
like the lady on the floor with the syringe

In some ways
I believe I was forgetting myself
leaving me behind
I believe I stayed outside
somehow I was absent while present, it was recoded.

This explains the candlelit carnival
this explains
caged animals
this explains
my explanations
my fears ready to be named
one by one as instructed

In the background
a transparent pipe waiting on red silk
a cat’s glass nap tower
shining its treasured ship mast
waving a rainbow box collecting

(to be continued…)
for poetry through the ceiling.
ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

"this kinda thread reminds me of those people who set fire to their own genitals for attention" ~ dunkman



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Re: Orange peelings

Postby acrossssSsssshittt » Wed Nov 24, 2010 3:45 pm

"lubricated chaos" ...

some crazy shit man... continue
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Re: Orange peelings

Postby chadwick » Fri Feb 17, 2012 8:27 am

and back for more soon
i have been collecting stories
working for the orchards as a parkriderwriter

to be continued...
for poetry through the ceiling.
ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

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