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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby DangDang » Thu Aug 12, 2010 12:56 pm

the wolf wrote:Image

for some reason this brings something out of me,....


He's waiting for his pizza, small and hot.
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby tremors » Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:28 pm

Impetuosity

I think it's time I realised
That when I get the burning feeling
And think fuckit-this-will-do
It really won't do.
Until I'm spared
And all I hear is an echo
Of anger resounding out
Across the airwaves
All I see is reflections of the disquiet
In me
Until I'm rescued
By a poster
By a painting
By another
By sleep
Until I'm rescued
By you
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby acrossssSsssshittt » Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:34 pm

tremors wrote:Impetuosity

I think it's time I realised
That when I get the burning feeling
And think fuckit-this-will-do
It really won't do.
Until I'm spared
And all I hear is an echo
Of anger resounding out
Across the airwaves
All I see is reflections of the disquiet
In me
Until I'm rescued
By a poster
By a painting
By another
By sleep
Until I'm rescued
By you



yeah man... this.. is something
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby tremors » Thu Aug 12, 2010 1:53 pm

hehe - yes it definitely is...... 'something'.

Thanks
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby pandora » Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:01 pm

tremors wrote:Impetuosity

I think it's time I realised
That when I get the burning feeling
And think fuckit-this-will-do
It really won't do.
Until I'm spared
And all I hear is an echo
Of anger resounding out
Across the airwaves
All I see is reflections of the disquiet
In me
Until I'm rescued
By a poster
By a painting
By another
By sleep
Until I'm rescued
By you


Impetuous vs Peace

I no longer know impetuous, I remember it but long in the past.
It is Time that has rescued me.
Turmoil, fury, impulsiveness, temper, unrest, disquiet,
they belong to the young.
My eyes now witness the Good and bring it to my heart.
Peace has smothered impetuous and let me be free.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rxfn_oe4gME&feature=related
"Judge yourself if you feel the need
Just let me known to be
In search of the truth myself
There is a drop of blood on the ground
And it seems to me that it's not my kind
And I can't be sure if its yours or mine."
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby tremors » Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:23 pm

Yes I remember peace, hearts, goodness
My eyes are the eyes of the old
Yet my spirit is frozen somewhere
In my youth
A juvenile
Delinquent
A puerile impetuous young man
I could tell you exactly where
Exactly where I left it
In a restaurant on valentines day 1996
The day a young man
Terrified
Ran from his own mother
Fleeing demons, real demons
To be trapped
Or rescued?
By a stranger
'Your mum is looking for you son'
She is pleading, weeping
At her wits end'
Please come back
To be rescued by an ambulance?
To be pinned down
And revived in a hazy corridor
Of fleeting shadows, of melted faces
Of friends faces merging into distant pasts and futures of unspeakable horror
Of a bunch of flowers on a waiting room table
Of a terrified mother and father
As I described the looping vision of cartoony exploding flowers, showers
As I shouted, shouted
'Please please don't do this to me, you are evil, pure evil'
As I was locked away.

And this is as far back as I can go in safety right now
Let's cut to later
And I'm exactly halfway through my years
If I'm lucky
And I'm bringing myself close to tears
And I'm eating poached eggs with ketchup
And they're going cold
And I wish I could be old
As my years
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby DangDang » Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:30 pm

pandora wrote: :lol: I love it, so 8-) and promptly off the sleeve creative as you are

"will the round roller attack you soon?
will you be bent in half....like a first quarter moon?"
great!!! Thank you Dang Dang :D


mikalina wrote:I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D


Thank you!
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby pandora » Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:38 pm

Image
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rxfn_oe4gME&feature=related
"Judge yourself if you feel the need
Just let me known to be
In search of the truth myself
There is a drop of blood on the ground
And it seems to me that it's not my kind
And I can't be sure if its yours or mine."
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby tremors » Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:44 pm

pandora wrote:Image



Wow, absolutely amazing

And exactly what the doctor ordered.

This place is getting better for me, kinder to me.

Even had time to skip back to the 'song lyrics' thread!!
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby tremors » Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:47 pm

pandora wrote:pizza heals :D



I believe this was your 5000th post Pandora!!
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby pandora » Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:48 pm

tremors wrote:
pandora wrote:Image



Wow, absolutely amazing

And exactly what the doctor ordered.

This place is getting better for me, kinder to me.

Even had time to skip back to the 'song lyrics' thread!!

I like you and thank you for sharing what is clearly your gift :D
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rxfn_oe4gME&feature=related
"Judge yourself if you feel the need
Just let me known to be
In search of the truth myself
There is a drop of blood on the ground
And it seems to me that it's not my kind
And I can't be sure if its yours or mine."
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby pandora » Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:53 pm

tremors wrote:
pandora wrote:pizza heals :D



I believe this was your 5000th post Pandora!!

oh boy I am addicted ! don't tell my family they already worry about me ;) ;)

'pizza heals' my 5000th post thats really ironic, how insightful :lol: and I love pizza!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rxfn_oe4gME&feature=related
"Judge yourself if you feel the need
Just let me known to be
In search of the truth myself
There is a drop of blood on the ground
And it seems to me that it's not my kind
And I can't be sure if its yours or mine."
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby tremors » Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:59 pm

pandora wrote:
tremors wrote:
pandora wrote:pizza heals :D



I believe this was your 5000th post Pandora!!

oh boy I am addicted ! don't tell my family they already worry about me ;) ;)

'pizza heals' my 5000th post thats really ironic, how insightful :lol: and I love pizza!!


Yeah, I know the feeling.

It's a great 5000th post. You start off talking a lot and trying to prove yourself and analysing things to death, then you gain wisdom and insight and calm down, then if you are fortunate you may become a guru who can enlighten simply with the words 'pizza heals'

followed by a beautiful painting.

One day you too could be like this!
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby pandora » Thu Aug 12, 2010 3:30 pm

tremors wrote:
pandora wrote:
tremors wrote:

I believe this was your 5000th post Pandora!!

oh boy I am addicted ! don't tell my family they already worry about me ;) ;)

'pizza heals' my 5000th post thats really ironic, how insightful :lol: and I love pizza!!


Yeah, I know the feeling.

It's a great 5000th post. You start off talking a lot and trying to prove yourself and analysing things to death, then you gain wisdom and insight and calm down, then if you are fortunate you may become a guru who can enlighten simply with the words 'pizza heals'

followed by a beautiful painting.

One day you too could be like this!
:D
guru... I should find a pic of that... good idea!!! or maybe a quote by a guru. I love your mind and the others here. Entertaining, enlightening, generous, kind, it must be the PJ gene!!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rxfn_oe4gME&feature=related
"Judge yourself if you feel the need
Just let me known to be
In search of the truth myself
There is a drop of blood on the ground
And it seems to me that it's not my kind
And I can't be sure if its yours or mine."
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby tremors » Thu Aug 12, 2010 4:40 pm

pandora wrote:
tremors wrote:


It's a great 5000th post. You start off talking a lot and trying to prove yourself and analysing things to death, then you gain wisdom and insight and calm down, then if you are fortunate you may become a guru who can enlighten simply with the words 'pizza heals'

followed by a beautiful painting.

One day you too could be like this!
:D
guru... I should find a pic of that... good idea!!! or maybe a quote by a guru. I love your mind and the others here. Entertaining, enlightening, generous, kind, it must be the PJ gene!!



the PJ gene - it's nurture over nature baby!

Here are a few sample 'guru' type avatars for your perusal Pandora

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