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Postby pacifier » Tue Feb 14, 2006 2:12 am

to the one I chose without a choice
you give me freedom, you give me myself
the peace of feeling alone with you
alone and together and always the truth


to the one i spoke without a voice
dreaming of a face unseen and needing, needing
we are two to become a third and a fourth
yet still only one, me South, you North

to rv
with love
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Postby Being Enlightened » Tue Feb 14, 2006 7:09 am

:D Awww that was uber sweet, pacifier! I hope rv appreciates it! :)
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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Postby coachchris » Tue Feb 14, 2006 7:14 am

I agree, very nice. Happy Valentines Day! Thanks for sharing.
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Postby pacifier » Tue Feb 14, 2006 7:00 pm

Being Enlightened wrote::D Awww that was uber sweet, pacifier! I hope rv appreciates it! :)


thank you. I think he did :)
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Postby pacifier » Tue Feb 14, 2006 7:01 pm

coachchris wrote:I agree, very nice. Happy Valentines Day! Thanks for sharing.


thanks. Hope your Valentines Day was a good one too :)

I actually wasn't expecting a response to this one
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Postby depopulationINC » Wed Feb 15, 2006 11:18 pm

that is a sweet piece
The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
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Postby pacifier » Wed Feb 15, 2006 11:45 pm

depopulationINC wrote:that is a sweet piece


thank you. I just rushed it down to share with my man. it felt incomplete, like i had more i wanted to write, but didn't know what, but now i'm thinking that reflects real-life. We are still going, there is still more to come, I just don't know what that is yet, but I'm certainly looking forward to it :)
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Postby twin1 » Sat Feb 18, 2006 6:54 pm

Very nice pacifier... :)
Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
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Postby Being Enlightened » Mon Feb 20, 2006 8:13 am

pacifier wrote:thank you. I just rushed it down to share with my man. it felt incomplete, like i had more i wanted to write, but didn't know what, but now i'm thinking that reflects real-life. We are still going, there is still more to come, I just don't know what that is yet, but I'm certainly looking forward to it :)


:) :) Exactly! Just keep that pen and paper handey for the next installment, pacifier. :)
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