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Re: Instant Messages

Postby justam » Thu Oct 06, 2011 8:43 am

Yes. I think they probably are. :D

They have poetic images in them too. 8-)
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Re: Instant Messages

Postby rollings » Thu Oct 06, 2011 9:32 am

justam wrote:Yes. I think they probably are. :D

They have poetic images in them too. 8-)


They sure do,
I think dreams are a fine source for poetic ideas.

and your dream would be no exception

this hound in my closet
shouldn't be
he's not a trophy
he's not my horse
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Re: Instant Messages

Postby Chip McFlennigan » Thu Oct 06, 2011 3:51 pm

justam wrote:I woke up to a vivid dream this morning. I wonder what it means.

The elements of this dream that I remember were-->

a sad brown hound being kept in a closet (with big muscles yet the poor guy was so passive!) I felt sad that no one was taking him out to get some exercise. :(

some person scooping large ice-cream sundays for customers while I was trying to pick up a flyer for something or get directions? (?)

A pile of carpets that my husband was throwing away that were actually mine from my mom. And, I wondered why he was getting rid of them without asking me because some of them I still wanted!

Oh, and apparently, when I found my hound in the closet, I remembered I used to have a horse that I gave away too. (!)


It was an odd dream. :?


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Re: Instant Messages

Postby justam » Thu Oct 06, 2011 5:15 pm

johnny america wrote:
justam wrote:I woke up to a vivid dream this morning. I wonder what it means.

The elements of this dream that I remember were-->

a sad brown hound being kept in a closet (with big muscles yet the poor guy was so passive!) I felt sad that no one was taking him out to get some exercise. :(

some person scooping large ice-cream sundays for customers while I was trying to pick up a flyer for something or get directions? (?)

A pile of carpets that my husband was throwing away that were actually mine from my mom. And, I wondered why he was getting rid of them without asking me because some of them I still wanted!

Oh, and apparently, when I found my hound in the closet, I remembered I used to have a horse that I gave away too. (!)


It was an odd dream. :?


This is actually a poem in disguise. JA likey.


Thanks. :D

I really woke up with these pictures still on the top of my head though. So I wrote them down as fast as possible so I wouldn't forget them.
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Re: Instant Messages

Postby mikalina » Fri Oct 07, 2011 4:56 pm

Here I am staring at my cellphone trying to send you a msg - but I'm not good with words,
how can I express how i feel, I can't seem to find the right words ... your on my mind all the time
I'm thinking of you
I'd rather live on a side of a mountain, than wonder through concrete and steel, I'd rather laugh with the rain and sunshine...

I am the shoreline, but you're the sea...

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Re: Instant Messages

Postby rollings » Fri Oct 07, 2011 6:55 pm

I'm glad that you look good
I'm glad that you don't practice witchcraft
I think you should know that I like you as much as Christmas

I feel the heart of you like families do
You'd look good on a motorcycle with me on it too
I love you deep back and... what?... do you think that I could not?

the smell of pine smells like you
the warmth of sunshine reminds me of you
or sometimes the sun
even when its done
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Re: Instant Messages

Postby Chip McFlennigan » Fri Oct 07, 2011 7:14 pm

Rollings, as much as I like your writing, I'm still gonna put you in the BOSTON CRAB while Chadwick gives you a leg drop from the top turnbuckle.

Then, I'll wave my hand back and forth in front of my face and let you know that despite what your eyes are telling your brain, you cannot actually see me.
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Re: Instant Messages

Postby rollings » Fri Oct 07, 2011 7:30 pm

johnny america wrote:Rollings, as much as I like CRAB drop from the top,
I'll hand my face what your brain cannot.


Yes, Johnny America,
that is so true
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Re: Instant Messages

Postby Chip McFlennigan » Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:48 pm

Rollings wrote:
johnny america wrote:Rollings, as much as I like CRAB drop from the top,
I'll hand my face what your brain cannot.


Yes, Johnny America,
that is so true


Stealing JA's gimmick of editing posts in quote format? For shame.

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Re: Instant Messages

Postby rollings » Sun Oct 09, 2011 8:15 am

much ado about nothing, really
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Re: Instant Messages

Postby chadwick » Sun Oct 09, 2011 9:06 am

instant messages instant thoughts instant pudding instant gratification instant oatmeal instant messenger instant approval instant rice instant camera instant espresso instant hot water heater instant jello instant karma instant loans instant life insurance instant noodles instant t-shirt printing instant uploads instant vagina cream instant win instant x rays instant zebras instant balls instant sugar instant sex instant music instant boobs instant pools instant movies instant mp3s instant horses instant cars instant bikes instant wrenches instant sockets instant sprockets instant rockets instant bombs instant seashells instant coffee instant burritos instant fish sticks instant fishing vessels instant highways instant trees and finally... instant boogers on a stick
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Re: Instant Messages

Postby tremors » Sun Oct 09, 2011 9:19 am

Autumn weather always promises the drop towards Christmas
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Re: Instant Messages

Postby mikalina » Sun Oct 09, 2011 12:03 pm

yoohoo, where are you ??.... must be in hiding.
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Re: Instant Messages

Postby rollings » Sun Oct 09, 2011 1:42 pm

the same thing
focused and gathered in front of you
is the same thing
ordinarily everywhere scattered
is the same thing

watch your gumball disease please
it, unlike the pink scream,
moves March links forward like addition
to your worst denominations...EVER
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Re: Instant Messages

Postby tremors » Sun Oct 09, 2011 1:47 pm

Rollings wrote:I'm glad that you look good
I'm glad that you don't practice witchcraft
I think you should know that I like you as much as Christmas

I feel the heart of you like families do
You'd look good on a motorcycle with me on it too
I love you deep back and... what?... do you think that I could not?

the smell of pine smells like you
the warmth of sunshine reminds me of you
or sometimes the sun
even when its done



This is an effin great poem of love. I hope someone writes something like this about me some day!
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