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Postby justam » Mon Aug 06, 2012 7:24 pm

:)
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Postby DinghyDog » Tue Aug 07, 2012 4:54 pm

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Postby justam » Tue Aug 07, 2012 7:34 pm

DinghyDog, where did you grow up?

These mountains are in North Carolina. :)
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Postby chadwick » Fri Aug 10, 2012 7:11 am

escaping further northbound than i-5
personally each and everyone
even last snowflakes falling for home
and all they feel
but don't know us

the city of new orleans
long way mornings away leading to sea
where steel rails balance out light and empty moons
for the tidal pull

it is during this force
that we fell in love
all minds connected
sharing one soil
one air lung
all wheat ground or standin tall
goin with wind like we're keeping score in rhythm

to be continued
would be swimmer's wishes
to bad shooting stars is murder
for poetry through the ceiling.
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Postby justam » Fri Aug 10, 2012 3:25 pm

Good one up above Chadwick.

I'm halfway home today. Tomorrow I'll be back in Florida.

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Re: Instant thoughts. (add yours if you like)

Postby rollings » Sun Aug 12, 2012 1:54 pm

chadwick wrote:i have a poem
a dark night ahead of me
and a pen running low on words

love
i have those who do
and i them
we have music together
walking in hand holding swaying with bird calls
and street lamps being lit by a faded sky of bright

we have given
we have taken blood from each one of us

if i ever begin
please will you end
if you and if i change as if thorns removing colors unseen
then we may have found our home
and have been triumphant

this exact victory smells of the sea-love
a salty air filled and emptied
alongside this earth and inside of its stone
and the worlds unseen by our naked eyes
are in lust of you and i


this is good
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Postby Godfather. » Sun Aug 12, 2012 6:40 pm

justam wrote::)
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looks like a little bit of heaven her on earth.

Godfather.
it dosen't matter to me what a man dose for a living you understand..
as long as his interest's don't conflict with mine.
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Postby justam » Mon Aug 13, 2012 4:30 pm

A truck. It has forty tubes. (:
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Postby rollings » Tue Aug 14, 2012 8:05 pm

while my nighttime has thunder
with wind, cracking trees

and plenty more rain
than I would ever need
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Postby justam » Wed Aug 15, 2012 8:54 am

It's nice having my mom visit. :)
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Postby mysticweed » Thu Aug 23, 2012 1:25 pm

I CAN'T BELIEVE IT

SNOT BUTTER
"running over the same old ground
what have you found?
the same old fears"

"those who can no longer pause to wonder and stand rapt in awe are as good as dead"
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Re: Instant Thoughts (add yours too if you like....)

Postby vogonpoetbythelake » Thu Aug 23, 2012 4:50 pm

My brain is like a ball of yarn
and I can't tell the story of knitting
Maybe I should take up weaving
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Re: Instant Thoughts (add yours too if you like....)

Postby rollings » Thu Aug 23, 2012 5:03 pm

vogonpoetbythelake wrote:My brain is like a ball of yarn
and I can't tell the story of knitting
Maybe I should take up weaving


:P
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Re: Instant Thoughts (add yours too if you like....)

Postby justam » Thu Sep 06, 2012 10:57 am

The day I lose my mind, we'll have to have a celebration. :geek:











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Re: Instant Thoughts (add yours too if you like....)

Postby pandora » Thu Sep 06, 2012 12:44 pm

72 doesn't seem so old anymore
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rxfn_oe4gME&feature=related
"Judge yourself if you feel the need
Just let me known to be
In search of the truth myself
There is a drop of blood on the ground
And it seems to me that it's not my kind
And I can't be sure if its yours or mine."
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