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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby hedonist » Fri May 18, 2012 9:04 am

Agreed - I like the visual of the vulnerability, and your perception of it.

I applied it to my sweetheart, but thinking this is moreso about a little one.

Either way, tenderness.
For every mistake, we must surely be learning.
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby pandora » Sat May 19, 2012 6:23 am

hedonist wrote:Agreed - I like the visual of the vulnerability, and your perception of it.

I applied it to my sweetheart, but thinking this is moreso about a little one.

Either way, tenderness.

It made my sweetheart get borderline weepy ...
his heart very sweet.

It is our mortality plus 33 years together
there is much vulnerability and also resignation.

Thanks for your words!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rxfn_oe4gME&feature=related
"Judge yourself if you feel the need
Just let me known to be
In search of the truth myself
There is a drop of blood on the ground
And it seems to me that it's not my kind
And I can't be sure if its yours or mine."
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby pandora » Sun Jul 15, 2012 7:27 am

Image

To see a deer in the wild, magical.

Through my mind run pictures,
unexpected moments, deer sightings, on a hike or a twilight drive.

Like the time walking in a thick, dark, moss covered woods.
Coming upon a family of deer laying under a circle of trees.
Appearing almost placed, picture perfect and
remaining so until we quietly passed.
We a guest in their home.

Amazed I was.

Or the time we took a moment of rest on a rock at the top
of a very large hill high above a wildflower meadow.

Hearing growing hoofbeats, rumbling from behind,
a young deer sprints by, running faster than I have ever seen,
his white tail a bobbing blur through lavender.
A picture I have kept in my head for over 30 years.

Countless memories of the majestic silhouettes,
peacefully feeding,
in the clearings of the campground chosen for that weekend.

Countless memories of inquisitive looks from soft brown eyes,
twitching ears at the sound of my voice saying
'hi! how are you!'

Memories that stir happy moments, a bond between myself and nature.
As important to me as anything here in this world.

God's world.

Now the City Deer.

A four corner busy intersection, two baby fawns feeding on tall grass,
no Mama in sight, middle of the day.

An 8 point buck, on a four lane highway, stopping traffic
under the scorching summer sun.

At the office, middle of an industrial park, lunchtime,
a lovely doe walks casually back to a small woods that has been spared,
allowed to remain untouched by human hand.
A tiny bit of God's world that is home to my new friend,
just outside the window.

From my heart pours a sadness,
new memories that will ache,
pictures that will run with tears
for the City Deer.

They are trapped here with me as God's world disappears.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rxfn_oe4gME&feature=related
"Judge yourself if you feel the need
Just let me known to be
In search of the truth myself
There is a drop of blood on the ground
And it seems to me that it's not my kind
And I can't be sure if its yours or mine."
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby pandora » Sun Jul 22, 2012 1:16 pm

Image


This man of mine, his heart
it's in the little things.

New baby bunny,
tennis ball with ears,
lives under the deck.

We have been enjoying him from the kitchen table,
he sneaks out early evening
has his dinner there where we can see.

My man mowed the back lawn yesterday...
I said ... you missed a little spot

he said ... no that is the bunny acre
I saved it for his dinner...

this man of mine
it's these little things
in his heart.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rxfn_oe4gME&feature=related
"Judge yourself if you feel the need
Just let me known to be
In search of the truth myself
There is a drop of blood on the ground
And it seems to me that it's not my kind
And I can't be sure if its yours or mine."
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby pandora » Sat Aug 18, 2012 9:09 am

My Child Image My Life

Sitting in my office ...
I hear her giggle at something out front ...
giggle ... she just makes that word for me.

Her laugh sounds small once again ...

my little one sitting indian style
inches from the TV screen
dressed in flannel footy Pajamas
she rolls over backwards, sprawling,
laughing harder now
till I laugh too ...

the memory brings a smile and a tear.

Then I hear her voice, asking dad a question ...
her voice sounds small once again ...

My baby, in her car seat, in the way back
of the minivan...
she's telling her pooh bear a story
it has a moral she adds
making sure Pooh gets the intended message,
even then a determined woman in the making ...

the memory brings a smile and a tear.

I stand slowly walk around the corner,
her face smiling at the sight of me ...
"Hey Mom... you're so quiet in there,
I didn't even know you were there!"
her smile broadens ...

Her smile she is small once again ...

my precious, patiently drawing a picture
careful to outline each stroke with a new color,
purposely and proudly creating a masterpiece
she magnets to the frig
then turns to me at the sink smiles and says
"see what I drew!" ...

the memory brings a smile and a tear.

She stands and comes my way ...
"Mom you ok are you crying?"
her concern on her lovely heart shaped face ...

her face now grown I can see myself in her
I see my eyes in hers
I hear my laugh in hers

'no hun you bring a smile and a tear is all' ...

"oh Mom"... she hugs me.

We feel the love we share ...
that will forever bring a smile and a tear.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rxfn_oe4gME&feature=related
"Judge yourself if you feel the need
Just let me known to be
In search of the truth myself
There is a drop of blood on the ground
And it seems to me that it's not my kind
And I can't be sure if its yours or mine."
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Re: Let's Get Creative

Postby pandora » Fri Nov 02, 2012 3:01 pm

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Cloud On My Ceiling

Trying times of late brought me weary
back to bed
though the day had barely started.

Curled quietly next to my lady dogs
reaching out for them now and then to feel their warmth
my hands my feet my nose cold.

I rolled over to watch the tall trees in the side yard sway
bordering on violent
a constant rushing sound through closed patio doors.

I thought of the people that would be effected by the storm.
I felt fortunate and sad and more weary for them.

Just then my eye caught a bit of reflected light on my bedroom wall.
It resembled a little cloud the size of my palm
dancing rocking jumping about.

I stared
mesmerized
watching it change shape to suit my desire.

I thought of the phenomenon that brought it to me.
The place that all light comes from and returns to.

Many minutes passed till it magically met the ceiling
Ha!
a cloud on my ceiling
trapped there just for me.

Then slowly slowly it began to get smaller smaller
and then it was gone
poof
disappeared.

In that moment the thought
'out of the darkness comes light'
whispered from my lips.

I look for it now each day around that time
it has not yet returned.

It seems it was a special light
a special time
more special than I knew.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rxfn_oe4gME&feature=related
"Judge yourself if you feel the need
Just let me known to be
In search of the truth myself
There is a drop of blood on the ground
And it seems to me that it's not my kind
And I can't be sure if its yours or mine."
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