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Postby justam » Sat Aug 18, 2012 10:03 pm

gone with the car's freeway flying
open window, hat lost forever in the wind
plastic pumpkin left on a train departed
small, insignificant, riding the cushioned current
with the lightness of a paper-airplane
blown high like a helium balloon on a windy day
or disappearing like confetti dropped off the roof of a tower so tall
o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o
Love is still the best state to live in.
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Re: accelerated aeration

Postby rollings » Wed Aug 22, 2012 10:21 pm

justam wrote:gone with the car's freeway flying
open window, hat lost forever in the wind
plastic pumpkin left on a train departed
small, insignificant, riding the cushioned current
with the lightness of a paper-airplane
blown high like a helium balloon on a windy day
or disappearing like confetti dropped off the roof of a tower so tall


:thumbup: this is good~!
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Re: accelerated aeration

Postby justam » Thu Aug 23, 2012 6:32 am

Thanks. :)
o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o
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